LOL @ you flippin a "Hardkore" production beat. Drum pattern is real tight, i see you replaced the claps wit snaps instead. Gave it a better grind, smooth feel. Ight, quality is tight. But the topic doesnt really fit this beat that well. It was like, i couldnt really take your drop seriously over the high violins in the background. Vocals need to be turned down.

Ight you come in. Wow, some real violent shit goin on. Decent drop. Same flow and rhyme pattern. You didnt really take a chance wit changing anything, kinda took away from your verse, made it kinda boring.

Chorus - chorus is straight, I like the adlibs you added. Real good feel.

2nd verse......same as first. Just a lot of punchlines with the same pattern. Thought you might have switched it up a little.

Overall, decent track. To me, it was mainly centered around your quality and the beat. I would have liked for you to play around wit the topic a lot more and had more of a transition of your flow from one verse to another.

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