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Old 11-17-06, 07:40 PM   #10
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The closest your ever got to winning with ease was runnin by Ya Fan
You Could put 12 of D'z in ya mouth & we still won't know the name of yo band

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V/ Stanza

Sir smash, you woulda (and shoulda)won easily with that Bacteria on a poem and Bird at the market line had you rhymed those but the words you used didn't even Rhyme and that's the main thing you wanna do when you rap. you shoulda only used 1 flu/sick line but since you used alotta them it looked like that's all you kept throwin. STanza had one line that was kinda Ok but reallly both of you have room to elevate. Weak battle but good try fellas
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