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Old 11-18-06, 12:50 PM   #8
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This rap shit is easy: get shot - get sales & strong props
I’m the next big rapper. ‘cause after I’ve met Glock I’ll be on top
---I don't like the wording, but it's okay. Could have hit a lot harder.

the league needs new talent, but we just see the worse entering
so fuck defending your title..
you should defend your title - like is it worth anything !?
---I see where you were going, but I don't like it.

dining bitches is a hobby, while your just gay @ venues mate
I treat ho’s to meals but you can’t decide with all the menu date
---lol.

I once thought Hensley was a ganktuh, on the block with a clip
until I realized the gun on his waist was just a Glock on his dick
---good stuff.

how else do you get props ? i’m not trying to start an active beef
I’d also speak of you in word association..
if Kempo mentioned “wack” or “weak”
---No, not liking.

and you need to quit the fake shit.. all you carry is worthless
it's like BS divorced Federline and married your verses
---Good concept, but not hitting.

I’m here to kill ya – quit the T.O nameplays ‘cause they ain’t hot son
I’ll have you gone soooo long you’ll change your name to shot gun
---Nah, weak closer.









lets yell off 1-10 in order and bury this kid in a land fill
cuz its T-minus skills so lets countdown until he gets killed
---Good concept, terrible wording.

I beat this kid before n second times the charm? well juss say that
cuz remember he's 'out for revenge' laying on the ground was payback
---...ehh, alright.

You know he's a penis pro with guys harming his hole
he's secure with his sexuality but every guy knows the alarm code
---lol.

looking to raise to the top but im here with a spotty nine
so when your ready to cross T. im here ready to dot ya eyes
---wording is ehh, but overall it's okay.

Your bitch is sad that she's with you, so screw the life lesson
n when u walk in with a Glock in ur girls hand. its not due to depression
---haha. Indirect but good stuff.

Kempo telling ppl 'Te Ora is the champ of the league'. think he's steaming
^ but asking them to join with this
.... will get him laughed outta the room like a Good Comedian
---No...

Trying to think of lines for days. but that chapter was weak
even If he slapped away a 'Slave owner's gun' could he drop a 'Master Piece'
---Alright... i guess.




I'm really disappointed... not a good battle, at all. However, I think Te Ora edged this due to overall consistency. He had a better flow and his set-ups actually had relevance to the punches. Glocks might of had this if he didn't have that "Good Comedian" punch.


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