Originally Posted by G Deuce

Simple. Switch your flow for the second verse. Its kinda hard to explain without telling you in person how it sounds. But your first and second verse are very similar in the rhyme scheme. Like, your flow starts and ends on the same part on almost every bar. Its to the point that i can predict when your going to end your next line. Like in your first verse, "cause I'm still a illegal" and the bars that follow end on the same tempo in the beat. What i suggest is to "play" with it, or in better terms, have a "free flow" instead of following this template that you have throughout this song. The template is not a bad thing until you use it continously in a song, which makes it sound repetitive. Hopefully that explained what i was talkin about.