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Old 11-18-06, 04:30 PM   #11
Te Ora
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Think you got talent with rap? This kid must defy sense,
'Cause everytime the crowd hears "black"....................
..........................................it's followed by "silence".
^ i feel you could've set this up a bit better.. but not bad
Streched lines are weak, same with your style actually,
Beat me? Nah, droppin' BS comes to every Bull naturally.
^ liked this one


vs.


Name punches are played as shit against me kid, step ya game up hoer
Cuz I’ll tell this bitch to get ya wieght up, n’ the fat fuck will eat more
^ ehh
Understand son ya always seen on the floor, I know it’s bad fa the knees
It’s like every1 predicted the win’d coming, how the victory was a breeze
^ very played

v/ RB
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