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Old 11-19-06, 02:31 PM   #13
Daubs
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Think you got talent with rap? This kid must defy sense,
'Cause everytime the crowd hears "black"....................
..........................................it's followed by "silence".

yeah this was solid

Streched lines are weak, same with your style actually,
Beat me? Nah, droppin' BS comes to every Bull naturally.

actually feelin this one, wordin a bit eh but concept was good.

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Name punches are played as shit against me kid, step ya game up hoer
Cuz I’ll tell this bitch to get ya wieght up, n’ the fat fuck will eat more

played out man

Understand son ya always seen on the floor, I know it’s bad fa the knees
It’s like every1 predicted the win’d coming, how the victory was a breeze

this was ok



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