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Old 11-19-06, 08:13 PM   #12
DaTrusHurtz
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beat me? nah son, see for that you gonna need some espioniage type shit
n his number one secret.....agent.....he been havin gay relationships wit
think i seen this wordplay before.. even if not, this line is aight, but its nothing special

vs.

who are you? i asked around.. no one would tell me wide & far
either your the no 1. secret, or cats don't know who the fuck you are
simple feed, but effective
you can't win. and you might act the bitch when it's clear
but hold tight..
cause your marraige was a victory for gay rights activists everywhere
eh, wasn't feelin' this really

vs.

N i ain't even tryna be rude, but shit....this nigga comin at me?!
Dude was runnin OUT of time, i had to bring the bitch BACK to reality
lol, this was kinda corny... not bad, but u didn't flip the concept as well as it coulda have been

Kinda close, but Te Ora got this.

Vote - Te Ora
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