ight took me a while to get back to you sorry.....had shit to do, so starting off lets see how this goes.......

obvious you need some quality issues fixed...you have some pronunciation thigns that should be fixed....sounds like your reading or struggling to get it out....like getting it out is good enough, you should sound like its what your feeling and getting it out....your lyrics are really good, but prajects verse is better cuz how he said his you get it.....your verse could be like DAMN if you say shit right, you got lyrics down nice your flow is getting there
implicit you need some adlibs you have dubs but some adlibs in the back would help it out.....praject you need to calm down on your adlibs haha......hook is good.....praject your adlibs are starting to become fimilar from other songs.....and eating warm food in the suburbs is good so you know incase you dont.....im enjoying it haha......haha the woos at the end sounded like j summers hopped on the track almost exactly like his voice haha.....good shit production wise up the volume in your verse implicit, and get some new gear to clear up some muddy vocals.....or up the highs, but i dont know how much that would help.....

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