Voted For: troublesome06
Past Tense
Yo dude first thing I looked at ya lyrics and was like where the fuck are they? you shoulda wrote a bit more. Your intro was way to long as well, you should just went right into the rappin man and at least wrote another 16. Anyway you had some decent lines but you was more self glorified, it was kinda weird cause it seemed like you were feedin off the punchlines he used on you. But anyway decent job.
Troublesome:
You got this one hands down, Past Tense coulda made it more interesting but nah he didn't hardly try. You talk about nuts to much you fuckin squirel
anyway your punches were there more and you took the effort to write a little bit more. I realized somin coo for my elevation in rap superstar as I went through ya lyrics but anyway nice job man you got my vote.