I see a point.. Doin' drugs.. the topic was right on so I can see you've experienced it.. you outlined all the main points of doin mdma and put a kinda story to it.. I liked it, the flow was a little off, and you need to work on ya vocab...
check out my drug song... "dream land" it's an audio...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/skipofftrackmusic.htm
just look for the title...