yeah I used to post them like this... I still do sometimes, like a paragraph... and yeah I got critiques on it too... but since I posted them like this I didn't have a hard time reading it... although that bar form does make it easier... I took their advise...
Yo dawg, I thought the flow on this was nice, specially at the begining... then it did go on and off... content was straigth, vocab was exeptional... lol... hot shit man... good wordplay too...

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