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Old 11-23-06, 04:06 AM   #9
Implicit
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alright aint heard you for a while. we need to get back on a track

hook - pretty cool like the energy. pretty clever

i like your energy on this first verse. flow is on point. dont really fall off anywhere. nothing that stood out lyrically. quality definitely got better

like this verse a lot better. cool flakin line. flow is a lil touchy in the middle of this verse though. you have gotten a lot better though


overall good job. jus fix that second verse in the middle. flow kinda falls off
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