Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend
Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines

vs.

NOTHING.


WAAHHH!! WAAHHH!! Do not fucking moan Enlightend...
This battle was weak, Enlightend had no punches worth quoting because it was all played stuff and "like this" and "like that". Dude, you can only get away with like one of those punches in a verse, and it must be dope. Also, stop with the // at the end of your bars.. people will know when they end because they will catch the rhyme.. not to mention you will move down to the next bar unless you write it all like a paragraph. Anyway, Stanza wins this because he had two bars that I felt were worth quoting not because they were super ill, but because they were ok enough and had the potential to be killer. That slash yo lines could've been fucking raw if you worded it correctly.

Anyway...

V/ - Stanza

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