Jinistarr, I really like your wordplay, a lot of creative stuff in there. However, I don't like your flow at all. I felt you fell off in lines. Infrequency. Don't worry, I won't be able to vote on SHIT for a few months at this rate. I would actually give this to Chaos despite the disparity in clever shit. He had flow, and it came consistent. His wordage wasn't lacking, per say...
But Jin, you have the foundation to make killer friggin' lines.