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Old 11-24-06, 12:58 AM   #8
King Solo
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Me against you puts me on GOD status, nail your face to a steeple
so just pray all you want............................
cause your not making the top 10 if there were only 9 people

VS.

NOTHING.


And now Money.. you need to realise that when I say you have NOTHING.. that means you have nothing worth mentioning. Your verse was weak and you are still stretching shit too much. You are forcing your rhymes and wordplay in places and your punches are worded shit. I don't mean to be a hateful motherfucker.. but you need to elevate your shit if you wanna hang with the decent battlers.
Grams.. your verse was weak also, I found only one bar that was decent. The concepts you had were pretty cool but sadly weak wording let you down in most places. That Top 10 bar though was pretty RAW.. better wording could've made it even better.. but it was still nice.

V/ - grams
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