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Old 11-24-06, 05:03 AM   #10
Te Ora
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you get no respect. wanna bet? tell ppl bout yourself in text
cuz a don-key travels along way but im talking bout the dude with Shrek
^lmao. dope nameplay

listen I dont need extra time! cuz what u said. i'll drop nothin

^^ this invisible line juss killed his verse n I was sorta rushing
^ i woulda made it "with what u said" in the set up, idea was cool tho

vs.


I spit-raw, keep it clean brah, cuz im coming with 'R' rating's to tear this 'G' apart
Flip it hard, bloody and scared, my rhymes leaving ya in a confision like a "Jig-saw"
^nah

Wanna come with movie lines? "kid" your whack n "play"ed
N dont worry about dropping on time..cuz ya can suck dick good enough
...just wait until Monday
^ ehh.. this wasn't that good an idea + it's worded horribly and stretched.

v/ Roger
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