Stanza

Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend


Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines

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Enlightend

really re-read re-write ur lines a 1000 times an ur still not gon make it rhyme/
just take ur time cuz E's divine and ya punches never connect like adjacent lines/



aight well enlightend his lines weren't bad...they juss weren't really hard hitting at all...like the spacing and slashes at the end isn't necassary...juss makes u look like a newbie..i think u have potential you had some good ideas but the wording wasn't there...stanza had 2 pretty cool punches enuff to take this...

vote-stanza

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