what i liked?

-the lyrics

-emotion

- the intro

-your rhyme scheme

what i wasnt sure if i liked it or not?

-the flow...cos it slipped off at some spots!

-the beat..cos its not not my taste but seems iight!

what i didnt like?

-the quality...not even a lil to be honest with u

- the vocals werent decently mixed yo...the volume didnt seem minimumly worked on..u went loud at some spots, then lower at some spots and then LOUD at other spots...shud have amplifyed the waves a lil..

-the dubs covered ur actual vocals too...

-the switch was nice but just TOO LOUD!..

-the delivery..nneds work


...lol damn that last blast cud tear up my speakers

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