STAN

Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend
^ ^OK INSULT
Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines
^ ^LOL GOOD JAB AT THE NEWBISH STUFF
I know you know bout 1st grade seein as you been in it for 4 yrs Straight
and for your common knowledge raps and Gas dont rhymes or relate
GOOD CAUSE IT’S THE TRUTH


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yep mayn u bout ta burn an roast, cuz dis verse will leave you left in hell/
and stanza in "terms of votes",u gon be "4 down" like dis is da "N-F-L"/
^ ^THAT’S ALRIGHT
really re-read re-write ur lines a 1000 times an ur still not gon make it rhyme/
just take ur time cuz E's divine and ya punches never connect like adjacent lines/
^ ^THE END WAS CREATIVE


Vote………..Stanza…………

Just base off quotes stanza won. Enlighten you got some punchlines which is good, don’t
Get me wrong, some were played but some had potential too. Some of your concepts
were better than his, Just the ones that had potential were negated by weak set ups
which made them less effective. Try to make you set up’s and Your follow though line connect more.

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