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Old 11-24-06, 06:17 PM   #8
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N.TAVAREZ
this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind
lol, this was a pretty clever nameplay.. it made me laugh although I still think that a bit better wording could've made it even better.

INHUMAN
lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave
the first bar was aight, nothing special. the second bar was decent.. the concept for the nameplay was fresh and all, but the wording was pretty weak and it comes across as too simplistic to have any real power.

N.TAVAREZ
Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up
Dope! This was a nice feed from his bar.. you turned the nameplay around dope and dropped the best bar of the battle.


Overall, this battle was pretty cool... the first three bars were all decent in their own rights, just some poor wording. The closing bar from Nelson was raw though and it killed both of Inhuman's bars. VOTE N.TAVAREZ
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