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Old 11-24-06, 09:05 PM   #9
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DAUBS
your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
this was a pretty simple punch, the concept wasn't entirely original and the whole nameplay shit on spek is pretty outdated now.. honestly, i thought it could be better, and the played factor let you down.

SPEKTIKUL
The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..
dissing oldham athletic is always fun in my book, they suck!! HA!! but really the punch was weak and had no hitting power. it was just a simple bar that basically said he aint won this league, and his team aint won a trophy. the second bar was ok, the concept could've been used a lot better though.

DAUBS
when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite
the bloods and crips concept is pretty played also now, but you executed it well enough with some nice wordplay. still though, the whole cryptonite wordplay does seem pointless because it doesnt go with any of the punch.. its just there as meaningless wordplay. maybe if you would've incorporated some superman shit into the punch also it would've been raw.


Honestly, I got this as a pretty even battle. Its like neither one of them bothered to try, but Spek is the king of doing that. On the one hand I've got daubs who had two played concepts for his bars.. and the cryptonite wordplay was pretty meaningless. And then, on the other hand I've got spek who had a played concept in one bar and dropped it simplistic.. and then an ok concept that was worded poorly. Well, in my book the quality of the punches were about the same to me... and daubs had 2 played concepts and spek only had 1.. so i'm gonna VOTE SPEKTIKUL
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