i liked the message you were trying to send, maybe i just cant see it but some of it doesnt seem to rhyme,
"Don’t give up hope, never act like you own the dope.
It owns you, so don’t provoke a relapse, it’s a slippery slope."
that didnt really seem to flow for me, but at least you not rapping about 22's and ice... much props for that... keep rhymin