Thread: The Last Hurrah
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Old 11-25-06, 02:16 PM   #6
JPoll
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loving the first rhyming structure...lot's of energy...lovin the simple beat behind the emotion...nice when it drops...quality is dece...good emotion, it helps the flow...you have a good one....emotion is downed a little i woulda liked it if you kept it in...in law...great line man...start it over, man thats nice as shit, you really know how to work a beat over man, you can tell this was well thought out man, flow is sick on the neo bars...i really like this its good...you slipped a couple of times, but i liked this song man....good shit.
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