not bad............delivery of ur concepts can use a lil work

u started off pretty hot and it kinda died down as u got towards the end....the denile wordplay is pretty played, but i like ur imagery....structure was solid.....flow was good, a lil off in some places......but i dont care

My Strength Is Tremendous Nuff To Snap A Bears Neck
I Laugh At Those Who Fear Death - I'll Burn Cigarettes On Your Bare Chest


Vex Always Stay Flagrant - Live Day To Day In The Main Matrix
Elder God Can Get Away Fuckin On The Period Of An Aids Patient!
Impale Your Body With Nine Rods - Till You Stop And Cry Soft
Then Put Your Last Words Under "Deathwishes" On My iPod!
Turning Mockerys Of House Sitters - While I Stomp Wizards
Then Mock Lizards Like Godzilla In My House Slippers!


best lines to me.....great imagery, keep spittin consistent like this, and ull make classics, reminds me of me when i get on this type of ish

"blindfold light till its near night// spearfight on a kite with my ear as my eye for a year till I hear sight//" - Omega

keep it up