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Old 11-29-06, 12:22 PM   #6
DaTrusHurtz
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I'm not expectin' a brawl.. 'coz now this dude's gone hyper
When he realised it was his family reunion - in the LBL Cypher
Its true my friend.. and still ure audio don't slip through the cracks
Hell, we all pick up ure CD, listen.. then sir, smash'alot of ure tracks
I'm hardcore.. straight bashin' you with blows until ure life is gone
But at least 'Alot's good for sumthin - I often park my car in one.

vs.

Beatin me? How is possible, must not know im unstopable
Yeah we all scream fletchER if we needed arrows in hospitals

Nick came okay, fairly consistent and some cool lines. Family reunion was a good idea, I was gonna do something like that this week, but u beat me too it... damn... Smash, this was an improvement for sure, but keep workin' at it. Even the line I quoted, ER lines are played. Work on being more creative and more direct. A lot ur shit just makes statements and isn't direct to the point with the punches like Nick is. Good try tho.

Vote - Nick Fletcher
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