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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
Of course I'm going to respond. Who else would? Stinky Peterson? I don't think so.
Anyway, I was reading this doing my DMX impression. Just so y'know. Not that it means anything, I just thought I'd point that out. Also, I'd like to point out I ate two bowls of ice cream last night and half a bag of potato chips.
Vocab was above my level. I had to look up Esoteric, obtuse, and hoors. But I still understand it. Like the last part, you being a spider. That doesn't mean you're creapy crawling, but it means that your laying things out like a spider lays it's web. But the rest of it conflicts in that you speak about being someplace else the whole time.
Oh wait, I get it. Y'know who else is someplace else that's laying out the universe? God. This poem is you trying to say your god! ISN'T IT?! ISN'T IT?!?! Wait... isn't it? No... no, I suppose not. Nevermind. Well, I tried, I was understanding it for a while.
Mo-mentai.
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