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Old 12-01-06, 05:06 PM   #10
Te Ora
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So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!

vs.

the victory is mine, your not worth the effort bitch
and why dont you HTML this since you like quotin shit


i wasn't really feeling this battle. stanza: i've seen the 'top of your game' thing used in a similar way before, and i never really felt it anyway. i like how you came more personal in your verse, but most of your lines were lacking execution. the 'lie about you being gay' line had potential, but i felt the rhyme was forced, and could've been a lot harsher. erel event: i don't know how you can drop half the lines he did, and even feed in two of your punches. your opener was structured all weird, and then you had shit that was wtf like your 'ate like chicken noodle soup'. your closer was a cool feed tho.


v/ Stanza. i'm edging this to him for coming more personal.
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