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Old 12-02-06, 05:02 PM   #2
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yes quality is definitely better. A LOT BETTER!

beat is cool. not really feelin it too much. but has a nice feel to it. intro is kinda boring to me. just listening to you go "ugh" "yeah". yeah and that whole part of jesse jackson was kinda unnecessary.

flow was on point. lyrically it was nothing special. it was decent. on that second verse it feels like the flow kinda fell off when you went for that faster part.

hook is cool. it works. nothing i would personally listen to. that weird sound at the end of the hook is pretty funny. oh its laughing.



overall nothing spectacular other than the fact that your quality is a lot better. lyrically you came decent. nothing i said wow to. cool track
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