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Old 12-02-06, 06:22 PM   #11
DaTrusHurtz
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he's trying to blow up from this battle, when ur a mystery writer
and making NO splash in this league like a good olympic diver
you actually thought this lame was bringing something
......but Roger will juss Capcom n produce a video game from it
He came out flat in this battle. shit couldn't be categorized as tight
and when I explore'd ya rhymes, I proved Christopher Columbus was right
Dont fold under pressure. this chump will choke like he's stuck
...So read Karma Sutra ... n find some new ways to fuck a battle up

vs.

no rhyme scheme, no concepts - but don't get pissed at me
your style is paper thin... but you don't have a shred of dignity
you won't awake from this spar & you can't right your ways
now that i've foiled your plans... i'll toss 'em in the microwave

That Michael Richards line was weak, was expecting a concept like that to hit hard on him, but rest of the verse was pretty cool, some tight concepts n' personals. I really liked the no splash in the league, lol. Hit hard cuz its true. Comedian came okay, but not title match worthy. Even the two lines I quoted weren't that strong. Just too many played ideas. Not a bad verse at all, just up your creativity.

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