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haha at the new mic pickin up 2 squeaks in ya voice....hahaha welcome to my pain.....jp what mic you get...and dude the wii is the shit......hootie n blow fish line in second verse? most wouldnt catch that.....good shit quality is better youll get it back to where it was when you mix some more on the new mic....needs more swagger on the hook....the intro was like yea so what.....uhh only thing id say is in the first verse you kept it steady all the way thru, some flow switch ups sould be used on this beat cuz the beat stays the same allt he time.....but good shit and you know that already.....stay up
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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