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Old 12-02-06, 07:08 PM   #2
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Listenin'...

yeah beat is hot..

Rev. Red.. u got the right delivery here..multis are good..and lyrics koo...and emotion also good..that's all the pros, cons , ya flow is a lil off..ya dig..and quality.....is not good but u cant do anything about..

oh snap this hook is actually pretty HOT...para suprised me there..hook is hot..I like that "YOU.."

Red same shit as first verse..flow is a bit better tho here...

this hook is pretty hot..has the right melody...u need to turn it up a lil bit..but this hook is crack...good job
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