Yo I though this was cool, it start picking up at the end and I was feeling you cuz I feel the same way about all this war shit. Used to be sort of a original concept but now more and more poeple touching on this cuz life is getting like that, so I won't knock you for not having something original. For as skill the way you put your / at the end of every line it makes it hard to see the empasis on where the flow is, and your word scheam is kinda basic. But over all it's good though
Keep spiitin'

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