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Old 12-03-06, 11:18 PM   #4
L.E
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Listening...

Beat is nice.

Quality is a hell of a lot better than the last shit I heard from you.

Flow is nice, but you could have stepped up your delivery. Sounds pretty monotonous. Lyrics are pretty cool, like the Nike line.

Hook...ehh...not much of a hook in my mind, would have better been off as a bridge. You've done better hooks before.

Second verse is better the first...like the funeral part.

Pretty nice track man. Keep it up.
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