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Old 03-06-03, 04:38 PM   #2
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This is aiight to me, it seem like you got a lot of methaphoric lines that could mean all of different things to different people, I don't know if you was writing a take it how it is type joint, or your own personal meaning but thats the feel I get from it. your flow seem kinda shaky and it seem like some of the words don't rhyme, which is kinda missin the point of spiting to me, unless this is a poem.
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