sup.

You dont think- intro is a bit dragged on...um, i was waiting for a nice solid bass line to come in but it hasnt come in yet, and i get the feeling it isnt going to. Seems like its missing somthing without maybe a double kick bass line.

Good day - you to do some EQ on your bass on this one,its not smooth and sound slike it slightly distorts/peaks. its peiced together nicely. Those vocals dont work well..
again your main focus needs to be a more consistant bass line,instead of focusing more on those drum sounds..this again,would eb solid with a nice smooth bass like through it.

The knocks- like the glass smashing effect used. this sound slike a intro into the main beat... yup there it goes its kicked up tempo.. you need a deeper pitch on that main dit dit dit dit dit dit bass, sounds to techno. overall better than the other two.

Jam on it- alot going on so soon, couldnt imagine a good track entering like this one.. um, yeh its kinda weird.. that effect sounds like a cross between a dorr opening and a fart.
lol.

good shit though, stay learning.