Listening...

Beat is decent...

Para...quality is decent. Flow starts off better, but it still sounds choppy at the end of each line. Lyrically, the track is pretty basic shit man...you can do better than that. "Wack" and "crap"? Come on man...lol. Delivery was a tad bit on the monotonous side, but getting better. Your should stray off from the underground kind of tracks for a while...you do alot of songs like these, maybe you should mix it up a bit? And I'm not talking just about emotional songs either.

Red...comes in, I like your voice. Flow starts off actually pretty good...fast, but it's smooth. The flow slowly falls off more and more though as it reaches the end of the song. Quality was a little bit muffled, but still acceptable. Lyrically nothing specail either. Delivery wise, you did well. You have potential.

Overall, decent track boys. Keep it up.

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