Yo man, this seems a bit rushed, put together quick, like a keystyle, some simple rhymes and vocab, flow could of been alot better too...
I like how you stating your opinions though... not many young cats I know really do that...
I hope we don't got to war either, got's my cousin and some of my boys in the army... now they calling me too... fuck it... I'll tell'em I got asthma or something... lol...

Peace