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Old 12-07-06, 01:52 AM   #5
Native Pryde
New to RV
 
Posts: 64
IP:

your a homo gay fuck. lovin male dick, don't deny it's true
on a ball? nah, more like a couple of balls are on you
sometimes peeps think your female. dude your life's a failure
so forget the pen, just take the pad..'n apply it to your genitalia
i'm outtie. ya whack. you shoulda picked up on the main signs
so yea dude, i've gotta jet..i don't wanna see your plane lines.

vs.

I Dont lie when I say today I saw ya verse & I thought that RV had shitted
People who reading it are like vegetarians and meat
.....They just dont get it

I like Formats verse better overall. Stanza jus came either way to played or jus lame.
format had tha jetline & tha pad line that i thought were cool. overall more consistant

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