Para - quality could be upped.......need to up ya delivery.....up ya emotion man......it sounds like ur juss readin off a sheet of paper.......but ya flowin on beat......

Red - quality could be upped........flow falls off at a few places....but rides beat well none the less.....emotion and delivery better than para but still needs more work....

Overall - strate track...lyrics were nice on both verses juss up that delivery and quality ....

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