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Old 12-07-06, 01:32 PM   #10
King Solo
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Shame about your old man, but when danger was near he couldn't hide
But just think...
...He was killed above the same sewers where your fucking career resides
I love Christmas time, Santa brings gifts from Seville to Texas
And your house is full of such a festive spirit it's like your paps was killed on Xmas
You're on a tighrope between life and death & ya got nothin to gloat on
Cause you've always walked a fine line... but you've never actually wrote one

VS.

Nothing.


Now, let me tell you why I didn't quote anything from K Illa so he says this is not a hate vote. Check it out, K Illa just had a verse full of multies to make a nice flow, but punchwise.. there was nothing. It was simply a bunch of statements like "shut the fuck up" or "i'm a kill you" or "i'm better than you" and that type of shit. In audio K Illa would be pretty decent, but text you need some originality, fresh wordplay and killer punchlines. You lacked in all those areas.
Appo, you didn't show any signs of ring rust. You came strong with a decent verse and most of your bars were ok. A couple of them were played concepts and I didn't quote them, like the dirt/meal line. Overall though, you killed it with the lines on his dad and brother.

V/ - Appocolyptik
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