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Old 12-07-06, 01:51 PM   #9
Appocolyptik
Beginning Your Ending
 
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Faggot bitch, why don't you give in. I don't wanna make you suffer
'Coz the last time I got riled 'n' popped off shots - I fucking killed your brother
My punches are nuclear, so as I stay bombin' the set
You'll be at ground, zero..
.. like where my hits will plant you, and how many votes you'll get
Dude, you shit talked at me too long and now I'll put you up to roast
You suck on RV.. you're better suited to BS..
.. because that's all you fucking post.

vs

Nothing

Nick came with a solid verse and I liked the way he attacked K Illa with a wealth of personals. The comeback line was humerous but I didn't quote it because come/cum in any shape or form is very played, but it was a decent flip on the concept. I liked the BS line too, because I was looking to incorporate some sort of BS punch into my verse but Nick already used it first, which made me sad. K Illa dropped an appalling verse which lacked punches as much as it did wording or personals. Look I don't mean to be harsh, but you need to elevate K. Read up on better peoples battles and look at how to make a concept into a harsh punch. All you came with was generic statements and a rhyme scheme which was at times utterly disgraceful. Overall this was an extremely one sided battle.

V/ Nick Fletcher
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