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Old 12-08-06, 12:58 AM   #11
Blay'all
 
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beat is on point... flow and delivery are both on point, you got your normal swagga that im startin to get used to. verses and hook are both tight, only think i can think of to say is that the topic of the hook doesnt really seem to go along with the flow of the verses very well... like, the hook is "fact or fiction" and the verses are all just like a diss track, ya dig?

overall dope job tho fam, just trynna think of some constructive criticism.
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