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Old 12-08-06, 01:18 PM   #9
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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ight finally got some free time.....first thing that hits me is the dubs are like 3 milla seconds behind or so......a lil off......the levels on the hook should be fixed up a bit with the yeah at the end.....beats a lil simple....you did good ont he fast flow tho......not bad....some good stuff but you know that im just here to help you with the stuff that needs work....peace
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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