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Old 12-08-06, 04:44 PM   #11
TEF
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Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches
^AN OK SHOT AT BEST CAUSE ATLEAST IT’S NOT PLAYED

V/ Gumwork (Reluctantly)

I ain’t gont lie fellas, I aint like this battle at all!! Bost came pretty damn soft. Player, I Got lost tryna read yur shit and that’s what fucked it up for you. If your gonna use a Poetry structure (Which doesn’t really cut it in Text) You still need to put some creative stuff and hard hits in it. I have no Idea where you were goin with the BET thing or the stallon dick line, It just seem like one big jumbled up mess. Gum need some better punches if he’s gonna be anything in this league but atleast he had the Rocky thing
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