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Please excuse My Sickness
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IP:
Comedian
i saw your sex mania battle,
& was reminded 'bout your girl & how i was fucking her first kid
Comedian fill'er to the point that she resemble one'a your verses
Aii Opener
I'm stopping this coward, and i'm ending this bitch kid
it's said Knowledge is Power... then Ace is energy efficient
.....Too self-centered like...
your jealousy's seen you whenever I step on the scene
You such a poor fuck, envy is the only thing that's getting you green
....Good...
you lose, i trash clouts- fuck this dude's gay babble
now you'll brag 'bout second place, too bad it's a two way battle
.....Kinda played concept but nice wording
sorry dog, but you homo dudes ain't hardly hot
the colors inside Ace's closet be looking like a smartie box
.....Meh...[b/]
Overall I say that This verse was a little selfcentered at a point but then again id say that it had some good pucnhez but played concepts
Vs.
This pizza faced geek shook of Glocks ain't no need to drop bombs
These red beams will blend in with his acne... when I dot Com
[b],,,:shock:...
It's flu time... buried under the shit you hacking up often...
got Trent Rezner stoppin on ya chest I put a nine inch nail in ya coffin
.....Aii....
you sleepign on me... knock some sense in em when i rock this bitch
He was dreaming of a win... than he came back into concisniss
So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits
Ya girls spreading rumors... ya sex life continues to plummet
Ain't no one on your dick... even when u sleep on ya stomach
These liines were nicely worded and hit correctly
Overall id say that this verse came with more direct punchez and it focused more on the opponent and then it was definitely a little more personally token and thats whats takin this battle to where it should be
my v/ Ace
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