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Old 12-09-06, 04:32 AM   #6
Implicit
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ayo its Done Deal back at it...hahaha

aint heard from you in a while. intro sounds wack. hook is cool. turn it up maybe just a little.

verse comes in. you come in with a lot of energy. sounds alright so far. at parts it sounds a little choppy.

i can hear you taking your breaths a little too much. you might want to fix that

flow falls off a couple of spots in the second verse..lyrics were ehh. nothing special.
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