Actually, I have another example of rewording a punch so it sounds better...
... the one I did for TEF in his battle against Hensley.
Quote:
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Originally Posted by TEF
Lost his Ups job to sign in the league thinking dudes in it suck
But ‘Change is a part of this bum’s life
……………….Yeah, that’s all people will put in his cup
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I personally would've worded it something like...
Last time he dominated the LBL, now he's gettin blasted up
But change is a part of this bum's life..
.. when he's down in the subway with his plastic cup.