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Old 12-10-06, 02:04 AM   #13
Te Ora
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The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
while i think this could've been worded better i liked the wordplay. punch of the battle
Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
meh


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Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
ight idea i guess. but the set up was random, and wording wasn't the best. his 1st punch would've been easy to flip too.
Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
nah. rhyme was forced & nameplay jus wasn't that great.


v/ TonyTone
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