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Originally posted by Alias-C
yo, either you on a whole different level... or a few parts of this just didn't make sense... most of this has complexity... and I didn't get some of it... but like I said, I'm a simple mothafucker.... lol...
You did have a pretty good flow... hot vocab... college level shit... good rhymes... although I found that some parts didn't exactly rhyme... thas all
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Thanks man, good looking.
It does have some complexity...Its mostly poetic devices, which some people don't all know. A lot of people didn't actually understand them, (friends and stuff, not this site).
and I know a lot of people don't understand half the lines because of that. Like the first bar. "Assonance", it means the rhyming of the consonants in two words. Assonance rhymes with Suffix, but not when you look at it.
Homophones are words that have the same pronounciation as another word, but not the same meaning.
Thanks again.
And Meadskillz shut up. Serious. I do take critism. But not from idiots. He said no constructive critism, so I don't listen. Out of all people you say that to me? You fucking idiot! Learn who the fuck I am before you talk...I am constantly taking advice from people.