The DM a sick bastard, he prob one of those kinda men...
On TV gettin busy with a chick.......Antennae them^^
nice wordplay never seen it before

Get slumped jerk, ur most def the weakest n the worst, son
But love hurts, which explains y Don's such a hateful person
nah not feeling love hurts wordplay

vs

Only time ya rhymes be smooth, is when they lamenated
Kid talking antennas? i got your "dreams on lock"
............lick Jimmy Cricket was incarenated
good idea, the wording couldve made it ill, like the set up and shit but good

Is it brown or tone, cuz ya alias got me so screwed fool
Cuz the words you spit are littel bit of both
............shitty with a flat tone-you tool
anotehr good idea that needs better execution
you getting better though, just work on th e wording so the punch can hit harder and keep at it don

this is close cuz i aint feel tones last punch and dons last punch had potential but not executed right , so based on the 1st two bars i would hafta give it to tone
v/ tone

but don i see the improvements in you weekly, keep it up